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Post by nala on Jan 26, 2012 21:46:57 GMT -5
Hear my voice,
it thunders again.
Sending its stormy winds through your silvery hair.
Do not be afraid sweet brown eyed child,
When you are mine
the bird will sing lullabies to your hearts content.
My lightning will not blind you,
But my body shall overpower you.
You will not fight,
and nor will he.
Your king obeys.
-- With or Without Love,
Caiaphas
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Яed
Death Eater
[M0n:-695]
CAINEISM !
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Post by Яed on Jan 26, 2012 23:54:35 GMT -5
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Post by nala on Jan 28, 2012 17:53:54 GMT -5
Go try sir, but I'm afraid you guessed wrong. |
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Post by nala on Jan 28, 2012 21:43:33 GMT -5
Caiaphas steals Shaelir.
Hear my voice,
it thunders again.
Sending its stormy winds through your silvery hair.
This reference goes towards both her fear of storms and the fact that she has a silver gene.
Do not be afraid sweet brown eyed child,
When you are mine
the bird will sing lullabies to your hearts content.
Both eye color and the reference to her disliking being treated like a child. (since Pilates a raven and his singing would be horrible xD)
My lightning will not blind you,
But my body shall overpower you.
You will not fight,
and nor will he.
More storm references and the fact that she is smaller then him.
Your king obeys.
-- With or Without Love,
Caiaphas
The storm reference comes from Paddeh's discription. so I wasn't able to get on yesterday and say that Red was incorrect IDK if that kills me? -shot- xDDD |
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Post by Strider on Jan 30, 2012 1:41:48 GMT -5
Alright! After taking a look at this, I'm going to point out a few things to you. First of all, I consider this to be very vague. I checked the thread that you mentioned with the storm description and I couldn't find anything (Paddeh may have updated it though, so I suppose that can't be helped). I think you definitely could have found some more ways to hint that it was Shaelir that your stallion wanted to steal. However, I'll let it slid this time, assume that the storm references were really there, and consider it a success. Just make sure to be a little less vague, next time. |
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Post by Strider on Jan 31, 2012 1:11:16 GMT -5
By request, this steal has been changed to a failure.
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